My Pitch Wars Team!

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My Pitch Wars folder was filled with fantastic entries. Seriously. You guys did such a great job matching your choices to the mentor wish lists. I got everything I asked for- contemporaries that tugged at my heart strings, some light fantasy that had me really intrigued, awesome mysteries and adventures, stories with bits of history, lots of magic, and some super cool concepts and ideas. With smooth writing and unique voices, you certainly gave me a lot to think about. But as you know, I could only choose one.

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My top pick is one that hooked me right away and it was the one I kept thinking about throughout the entry period. It’s a mystery/adventure with magical elements, plus it has a hot-air balloon, a clever mc, and a genie! So, please welcome Erin Ferguson with her amazing story BALLOONING to my team! (See all teams over at Brenda Drake’s blog.)

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My alternates also have some mix of mystery, adventure, and magic and had me curious as to what will happen next in the story. Say hello to Samantha Farkas with THE LOST FIGUREHEAD . . .

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. . . and Vicki Tremper with THE TRANSPARENTS.

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I’m going to say it again- there were so many good entries and I am HONORED that you chose to send your work to me. I tried to give everyone some constructive feedback, but please remember it’s only one opinion- consider it notes a CP might write.

You are all so brave to put your work out there and I admire your determination to get it in the best shape you can. I wish you all the best of luck!

*Check out our new site www.cpseek.com to chat with other writers and find critique partners!*

Contests Are For . . . (Part 2)

Here are five more things contests are really for, in the words of your fellow writers. If you missed Part 1, you can read it here.

*If you’re looking to chat with other writers or find a critique partner, check out www.cpseek.com!*

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6. Getting motivated.

“I find nothing motivates me more than knowing other writers are out there, doing the same thing I'm doing, working just as hard. Contests are a wealth of people all struggling in the trenches together, and what's more motivating than that?” –Dahlia @MissDahlELama

“On a few different occasions, after entering a contest, I received an e-mail from a "Random Citizen" telling me how much they loved my entry. THAT, more than anything else encouraged me to keep going. Just a taste of how it feels to touch someone with your work.” –Janet @MsVerbose

“There’s nothing like winning a contest to help push away those “I’m never gonna get published” naysaying thoughts bumping around my head!  Even if I don’t win, an encouraging crit is enough fuel to push me forward, to let me know I am on the right track.” –Stephanie @stefwass

“I am absolutely someone who is motivated by deadlines, but the ones I impose on myself (you will finish this revision one month from today!) seem artificial and harder ot keep. But if I know that there's a contest coming up, that maybe I'll get lucky and have a request on a certain date, it is absolutely easier to keep my backside in the chair and my eyes on the screen, to persevere and get the work done.” –Elaine @ElaineBVickers

“Contests can jumpstart you into finishing things you've been putting off--perfecting your query, writing your synopsis, etc.” – Emily @emcushi

7. Getting encouragement.

“I love the camaraderie among contest participants! There's so much encouragement, even among people who are technically competitors, and I think that's so important at such a scary phase of the process.” –Dahlia

“I gained support and confidence with the feedback. All a win-win experience.” –Karen @love8rockets

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8. Being part of a community.

“The writing community is an amazing thing - a wealth of resources and knowledge, a pool of willing betas/CPs... writing is only as solitary a practice as you choose to make it, and if you really open up (within reason!) it's pretty amazing what other people will do to help a stranger, and even better when they no longer feel like strangers!” -Dahlia

“The #1 thing I've learned from contests? The writing community is AMAZING--everyone is so supportive, helpful, and willing to cheer each other on.” – Emily

“Writing is such lonely work, and sometimes it feels like you're the only one who can't ‘make it.’ Contests always remind me that I'm not alone. I'm part of a broad community of wonderful, helpful people who are brave enough to put themselves out there and take risks. It makes me want to do better and keep going!” –Janet

“I entered my first contest last spring, a Twitter pitch party. The request I got from a top agent was great, but what I really got out of it was writer friends who knew what I was going through and are now right there with me, cheering my wins and booing my losses. Thanks to that contest, I now have met with other writers in person (they're just as awesome as they are online!). I talk to dozens of writers daily through Twitter, email, and blogs. I also know tons much more about the literary world than I did before (agents and editors are people too, apparently!). I'm no longer slogging through the trenches alone—I'm shoulder-to-shoulder with awesome people just like me. I am so thrilled I decided to enter that contest. :-)” -Triona @trionabmurphy

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9. Paying it forward.

“Writers I’ve met through contests and I are now actively cheering each other along our paths to publication and, not only has my writing grown as a result of these connections, but so has my enjoyment of the whole process and the connection I feel to the larger kidlit community.” –Jen @jenniferlmalone

“Having the opportunity to pay it forward as a Pitch Wars mentor feels pretty amazing. You realize how much work goes on behind the scenes, strictly because writers are willing to spend tons of time and energy helping other writers they don't even know. I know Cupid, Krista Van Dolzer, Brenda Drake, and Monica B.W. worked like crazy on the contest that got me my agent, and that they continue to help the community (all four are involved in Pitch Wars) while writing their own stuff boggles my mind. How could I not want to make every effort to pay it forward with role models like that??” –Dahlia

“The writing community is the most supportive group of people I've ever come across. Every writer who takes the time to help another writer, whether that's answering questions, critiquing work, holding contests, etc. is AMAZING! Let's keep paying it forward people!” –Kim @kpchase817

“The fantastic thing about this community is that everybody is willing to help each other. Mentoring in contests, or simply critiquing entries, is a wonderful way to pay it forward--and learning something in the process!” –Marieke @mariekeyn

 

10. Winning- but not necessarily the contest.

“’Winning’ the contest is seriously the least of it. Gaining a community, betas, CPs, cheerleaders... these things are invaluable. It's like that "teach a man to fish" saying. Winning a contest gets you the fish, and it's great, but just being in a contest gives you all the tools to fish on your own, and that's no small thing!” –Dahlia

“You always win something when entering a contest. Info on what agents are looking for, feedback on your pitch, seeing what else is out there, what works and what doesn't, connecting with other writers and making friends. It's all Winning!” -Kim

Sure, winning could be getting to the final round and collecting requests from agents. If you do that, good for you! But if you’ve accomplished any of the things on this list, consider the contest a win. :)

*A big thank you to the fabulous writers who contributed to the post!

Contests Are For . . . (Part 1)

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If you’re entering contests simply to snag an agent, you’re missing out on all the other things contests make possible. Whether you dive right in or cheer from the sidelines, there is A LOT you can gain from them- all things that can lead you on your path to getting an agent.

Here are five things contests are really for, in the words of your fellow writers. (Click here for five more in Part 2!)


Yup, that’s me (@writeforapples) in the middle, with @trionabmurphy & @fizzygrrl on our writing weekend. I met Triona and got to know Summer through twitter and contests.



1. Making connections.

“The cool thing is, the competition could become your new CP. I've met fabulous people through participating in contests.” – Emily @emcushi

“Making connections is, in my opinion, the greatest value of contests. I met all of my CPs either directly or indirectly through the contest that got me my agent. Think about it: You're likeminded writers in similar stages of the publication process - it's instant bonding!” –Dahlia @MissDahlELama

“I discovered some fantastic manuscripts, amazing new voices, and wonderful writers through contests. I met several CPs that way and betaed dozens of manuscripts, staying in touch with many writers. It's great to be allowed to share part of the journey.” –Marieke @mariekeyn

“I have met so many great people through contests. Some have even turned into perfect CP's because they knew my style from the beginning.” –Janet @MsVerbose

“I've met many writers in my genre and have had invaluable critiques from writers outside of my immediate writer's group.” –Karen @love8rockets

“I entered my first contest almost a year ago for a manuscript and query that, in retrospect, were awful. I actually looked back at that first entry and discovered that my first comment was from someone who has since become a good friend. While neither of us remembered that comment, it was probably the seed that started a friendship that I now value very much. I've found so many other friends and critique partners, and win or lose, it's such an affirming and positive experience to be cheered on by your competition. Contests, for me, reaffirm what a great community writers can belong to.” –Elaine @ElaineBVickers

“I stumbled upon some great people through a contest/pitch hash tag on twitter.  An agent I follow mentioned to his followers to use it to pitch their book and I jumped on the bandwagon.  This is how I met Summer and others.  I think it's how people thought we all met because of The Writer’s Voice contest. I jumped in using the hash tag without knowing what the heck was going on.” –Jess @muchadoabout77

“What was really impactful for me was finding those queries for stories I knew I would LOVE to read. Of course I told the authors just that in the comment box, but if I could determine who those authors were, I also followed them on Twitter and struck up conversations. It wasn't long before a few of those conversations led to MS swaps.” –Jen @jenniferlmalone

“This is my favorite thing about contests. They are such an awesome opportunity to make new writer friends and connect with people you otherwise may have never interacted with before. Some of my CPs and best buddies all stemmed from me entering a writing competition. I never "won" in the competition sense, but that didn't stop me from winning new writer friends. Friends who then supported me, read my work and gave feedback, talked me through the getting an agent process, and overall kept me sane. These people ultimately helped me land my agent and I will forever be thankful for them. (I <3 you Dee!)” –Kim @kpchase817 notebooks,budgets,fotolia,office,prints,reports,schools,writings,yes,pen2. Getting feedback.

“Maybe something (your query, logline, first 250 words) needs to be changed. Luckily, in some contests, you receive valuable instant feedback to let you know exactly what that change could be.” –Emily

“Let the comments sink in for a few weeks. Initially, you may disagree with them.  But eventually, you’ll find nuggets of truth, and common themes that point to areas that need to be addressed in your writing.  For me, looking back at feedback from a contest that took place a year ago, I can step back and see kernels of wisdom.  At the time of the contest, I was defensive.” –Stefanie @stefwass

“The amount of feedback you'll get is often determined by the nature of the contest, and those that allow public critique are often the most valuable. This includes non-contest sites like theqqqe.blogspot.com, where I got the feedback that made my query so much more successful. As an added bonus, public-critique contests help you develop the thick skin that you'll need regardless of how far your writing career goes. :)” -Elaine

“The feedback that comes from contests can be tricky to parse through, because it comes from so many different sources who really don't necessarily know any better than you do. I've seen terrible advice given in contests, and it kills me. BUT, when you see that piece of advice that totally and completely resonates with you and sparks a brilliant revision idea? Priceless.” -Dahlia

“Learning what wasn't working was as, if not more, important than the confidence boost that came from the supportive comments.” –Jen

3. Learning.

"If some entries receive a lot of requests, go ahead and dissect the query, logline, etc to see what's making it so darn appealing.” –Emily

“Analyzing what wasn’t working in others’ queries and/or opening pages often opened my eyes to similar mistakes in mine and the comments made on my entry caused me to look long and hard at what I was presenting to agents.” –Jen

“I love reading feedback for all sorts of entries. It's so interesting to see subjectivity in action, to see how different readers react differently to stories. I may not agree with all of it, but contests with live feedback are a fantastic insight in the mind of other readers/agents/editors.” -Marieke

“Reading other critiques is a great way to improve your writing. Also, studying craft: How did the writer nail the logline? What was it about his first sentence that had me hooked with just a few words?” -Stefanie

“There's a ton you can learn from contests if you really pay attention. They're often springboards for experienced betas and industry pros to teach invaluable lessons whether in comments or on Twitter.” –Dahlia

"I Learned about what writers in my genre are writing right now.” –Karen

"Again, public critique contests are a great way to learn, often by critiquing others' writing. Whether an entry worked or didn't work for you, the analysis of why can almost always be applied to your own writing. And this applies for non-critiqued contests as well. Which entries got the most requests? Was it the writing, or the hook, or a killer combination of both? What can you learn and apply from entries that were similar to yours?” –Elaine

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4. Finding out about agents.

“For me, it’s interesting to compare agent feedback on the same piece of writing. It is subjective, but I can tell so much about an agent’s style, personality, and whether or not he/she would push me editorially, which for me, is something I am seeking.” –Stefanie

“I first learned of my agent through a contest. No, I didn't win that one, but I noted what interested her and that's when I added her to my list of agents to query.” -Janet

“Of course, every writer should be researching agents on his/her own, but contests can be a great way to narrow down an overwhelming list and learn real specifics from an agent's wish list.” –Dahliacommunications,computing,emails,Internet,messages,New Message,Photographs,technology,text,World Wide Web,WWW5. Understanding the process.

“I quickly realized through these new connections that I didn't know bupkiss about getting published.  The contest allowed me to meet critique partners and new friends I'm constantly learning from, being motivated by, and motivating in return.” –Jess

“Contests helped me realize that a full request doesn’t necessarily mean an offer of rep or a publishing contract!  I now understand that this is a long, bumpy journey, with many other writers vying for the same goal.” -Stefanie

*A big thank you to the fabulous writers who contributed to the post! Go follow them on twitter. :)

Pitch Wars ... the Agents!

Are you ready for this? We have 16 incredible agents vying for our Pitch Wars team manuscripts. We're so excited to see what pitches they fall in love with, and what teams will win the coveted Pitch Wars Most Requested Manuscript title. And, in no particular order, here are the agents...

Louise Fury L. Perkins Agency Twitter: @louisefury Louise is seeking teen Sci-Fi and Young Adult horror. She's also on the hunt for deep, dark contemporary YA and select Middle Grade fiction with a literary feel--it must be realistic and thought provoking and the characters must be authentic and original. Louise loves horror and romance, especially Regency and Victorian.

Jessica Sinsheimer Sarah Jane Freymann Literary Agency Twitter: @jsinsheim Jessica is seeking Literary, Women's, Middle Grade, and Young Adult Fiction.

Natalie Fischer Lakosil Bradford Literary Agency Twitter: @Natalie_Lakosil Natalie is looking for commercial fiction, with an emphasis in children’s literature (from picture book-teen), romance (contemporary, paranormal and historical), and upmarket women’s fiction. Specific likes include historical, multi-cultural, paranormal, sci-fi/fantasy, gritty, thrilling and darker contemporary novels, and middle grade with heart.

Pam van Hylckama Vlieg Larsen Pomada Literary Agents Twitter: @BookaliciousPam Pam represents young adult and middle grade children’s book authors, and adult romance authors.

Jordy Albert The Booker Albert Agency Twitter: @bluedragonfly81 Jordy is on the look out for Romance (contemporary, historical/Regency, and paranormal). YA contemporary/historical or dystopian, sci-fi/fantasy with romance elements. She's also open to YA GLBT within those genres. She'd love to see unique, well-developed plots featuring time travel, competitions, or travel.

Andrea Somberg Harvey Klinger Inc. Twitter: @andreasomberg Andrea's looking for the following categories: Fiction; literary, commercial, womens fiction, romance, thrillers, mystery, paranormal, fantasy, science fiction, young adult, middle grade.

Jennifer Mishler Literary Counsel Twitter: @literarycounsel Jennifer is seeking Young Adult Fantasy, Young Adult Contemporary, Young Adult Literary, and Young Adult Historical.

Suzie Townsend New Leaf Literary & Media, Inc. Twitter: @sztownsend81 Suzie represents adult and children's fiction. In adult, she's specifically looking for romance (historical and paranormal), and fantasy (urban fantasy, science fiction, steampunk, epic fantasy). In Childrens' she loves YA (all subgenres) and is dying to find great Middle Grade projects (especially something akin to the recent movie SUPER 8).

Victoria Marini Gelfman Schneider Literary Agents, Inc. Twitter: @LitAgentMarini Victoria is looking for literary fiction, commercial fiction, pop-culture non-fiction, and young adult. She is very interested in acquiring engaging Literary fiction and mysteries / suspense, commercial women's fiction (romantic suspense, sci-fi, fantasy), and Young Adult (contemporary, sci-fi/fantasy, thriller and horror ).

Kerry Sparks Levine Greenberg Literary Agency, Inc. Twitter: @Kerry_Sparks Kerry is looking for Young Adult and Middle-Grade fiction, both commercial and literary. She tends to shy away from werewolves, zombies, faeries, and the like, but she’ll read anything with a fresh voice and compelling characters. She is particularly keen on contemporary YA, quirky MG, books with a strong cinematic element.

Drea Cohane The Rights Factory Literary Agents Drea is currently seeking: fiction, memoir, crime, non-fiction and YA. Her roster consists of British, American, and Canadian clients. International talent is welcome.

Katie Shea Donald Maass Literary Agency Twitter: @AgentShea Katie specializes in fiction and memoir, especially women’s fiction and commercial-scale literary fiction, and realistic YA. She is most interested in coming-of-age stories and stories of unique relationships.

Elise Capron Dijkstra Literary Agency Twitter: @EliseCapron Elise is interested in serious character-driven literary fiction, well-written narrative nonfiction, and short story collections. (Note: She is not interested in Fantasy, young-adult/middle-grade, picture books, romance, and sci-fi.) She aims to work with writers who have a realistic sense of the market and their audience.

Jodell Sadler Sadler-Caravette Children's Literary Twitter: @picturebklunch Jodell is interested in YA, MG (especially funny) , fiction and nonfiction, book proposals, and picture books. She will also coach writers wanting to self publish. She simply loves a well-paced story that moves her between joy and tears.

Corvisiero Literary Agency Brittany and Michelle are teaming up to look for Adult, YA, and MG manuscripts.

Michelle Johnson Twitter: @MJsRetweet Michelle’s published one novel, The Footloose Killer, and edited several others for publishing houses and private clients. She also is a Script/Story consultant on an independent film in Halifax, NS, Canada, and enjoys working closely with writers to help them develop their voice and craft.

Brittany Howard Twitter: @brittanydhoward When reading, Brittany loves to be introduced to new and interesting people and places. She looks for strong voice, good storytelling, and fascinating relationships between characters—romantic or otherwise. More than anything, she loves when a book surprises her.

There's just one more day to get your applications in for Pitch Wars. Make sure to check out this post here to get all the details.