Query.Sign.Submit.Debut! with Jennie K. Brown

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Jennie is a young adult author and her debut, POPPY MAYBERRY, THE MONDAY, releases from Month9Books/Tantrum Books on September 13, 2016. She is represented by Bill Contardi at Brandt & Hochman Literary Agency.

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What advice would you give to querying writers?

My biggest piece of advice would be DON’T GIVE UP! I know you’ve heard over and over again that publishing is subjective – believe me, it is! I think I queried at least 40 agents with POPPY. Although ten asked for the MS, only 3 liked it enough to even offer. Did I mention that was in my SECOND round of querying? Take any constructive criticism you get from agents, friends, writing partners, and if you’re up for it, go back and revise a few more times. I did two MAJOR overhauls on POPPY before landing my first agent.

Are there any conferences you attended that really helped you move forward as a writer during this stage?

One of conferences that gave me confidence in POPPY was the Eastern PA’s SCBWI Critique Fest. The first pages of POPPY were critiqued by an author, an editor, and an agent. All three loved the first look and both the editor and agent asked me to submit my full MS. Although they both did ultimately pass, I got the confidence in my writing that I needed at that time. I also met some other amazing MG and YA authors!

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What was the week surrounding your offers of representation like for you?

My first agent left the publishing business in the summer of 2014, and it was shortly after that I began searching for a new agent. I actually had three offers this time around and that week was totally surreal and nerve-wracking. I remember scheduling three phone conversations with three different agents, and here’s the thing – they all were so awesome to talk to! In the end, I went with Bill Contardi of Brandt & Hochman because he works with other authors who are pubbed under my publisher and because I admire the work of some of his other authors. I also like how direct and to-the-point Bill is!

Do you send sample chapters to your agent or do you wait until the manuscript is finished?

That actually depends. I had two new YA projects I was working on and I just wasn’t sure which one I wanted to focus on, so I sent the opening few chapters of both novels to Bill. His feedback helped me stick with one. Then I got this awesome idea for an MG mystery and discussed it with Bill over the phone. That time I decided to finish the MS before sending it.

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What do you suggest a writer does while out on submission?

Read and Write. Whatever you do – do not compulsively check your email hundreds of times a day and do not FB or twitter stalk the editors. Both of those actions are all-consuming and a huge waste of time. (Gosh – can I please follow my own advice?!)

How much contact do you have with your agent when you are out on submission?

My agent forwards me everything pretty much right away. So when I’m out on submission, I hear from him when he hears from editors.

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What is the best thing about being a debut author?

I would have to say that working with and getting to know other debut authors has been the best thing. I love being a part of the Sweet Sixteens and I love my Sixteen to Read girls! Everyone is so supportive.

Have you done any conferences, book festivals, or events as an author? What was that like?

I did my first bookish event in October at the PA Council for Teachers of English and Language Arts conference. I was one of the featured authors at the author breakfast where I got to share my journey to publication and my inspiration behind POPPY.

Then at the beginning of February, I spoke to 500 elementary school students about life as a teacher and author. It was so much fun and the kids treated me like a celebrity. One 3rd grader asked if I was friends with J.K. Rowling! haha In April I’ll be at the Texas Library Association conference and then in June I plan on attending ALA in Orlando.

Thank you, Jennie!

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Query.Sign.Submit.Debut! with Lee Gjertsen Malone

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Lee is a middle grade author and her debut, THE LAST BOY AT ST. EDITH’S, is now available from Aladdin/S&S! She is represented by Bridget Smith of Dunham Literary.

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What advice would you give to querying writers?

People say querying is unfair but I think it is the opposite – it’s fair, but brutally so. We all get that same few minutes to pique an agent’s attention. So my first piece of advice is, don’t blow it! Write the best query you can, query agents interested in your category, and follow instructions. Don’t let something small and stupid send you to the bottom of the pile.

My second piece of advice is that like writing, it’s a marathon, not a sprint. And I say this as someone who got her first agent in less than three weeks of querying! But this is a process that takes time for the agents and the editors and so authors need to take that into account too. Keep good records, take any feedback you get seriously, and keep at it. Many authors, myself included, got plenty of rejections before we got an agent or a book deal. Sometimes the difference between getting an agent and not getting one is just mustering up the courage to send out another batch of queries.

Did you ever have a Revise & Resubmit? What should a writer consider when deciding whether or not to take one on?

I actually have a lot of experience with this – the LAST BOY AT ST. EDITH’S transformed from a YA novel to an MG novel because of an R&R. I think one important consideration for an R&R is that the suggestions be real and relatively detailed – not just one line of “maybe make it first person?” and even more importantly, that you as a writer are nodding along as you read what the agent has to say. The changes have to really resonate with you in a meaningful way, or else the revisions won’t work. I think any agent that offers an R&R is doing it seriously, so the author needs to take it equally as seriously. Don’t do an R&R just because you feel like you have to, because an agent asked.

If querying was a long time ago for you, what do you remember most?

It was kind of a long time ago, but I still get a little flutter in my heart when I see an email that has all caps in the subject line. Half the time nowadays they are from someplace like Old Navy having a sale, but I still have that gut reaction.

Had you queried other books before the one that got you your agent?

My first time querying was extremely short. I had an agent two and a half weeks after I sent out my first query. But that book didn’t sell and the agent and I didn’t see eye-to-eye on my next project...and so I was back in the querying trenches again, older and wiser. Despite that, I actually enjoy querying and got a lot of great feedback from a number of agents. I know some people feel like it’s an impersonal process but I’ve had enough personal interactions to make it always positive for me. I always felt like there were people out there rooting for me and my book, not everyone, but enough people to keep me at it. When my book sold, an agent who I had done an R&R with but decided not to sign me actually sent me a note of congratulations. It’s that sort of thing that makes me realize that they really do want authors to succeed, even if sometimes it doesn’t feel that way when you are sending out queries into what seems like an endless void.

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Are there any specific questions you’d suggest writers ask an offering agent during “The Call”?

Having had two “calls” in my life I think the best is to first, get a sense of the person and their passion for your book. What do they like about it? Ideally you want an agent who loves your book for the same reasons you do. Next you need to get a sense of working style. That’s pretty hard in a phone call, but by asking questions about how an agent helps with revisions, or their method of bringing a book to editors, you can get a sense of their level of flexibility and their overall professionalism. This is someone who is going to potentially give you some of the best news or the worst news you’ll ever get as a writer. You want it to be someone you feel is on your side 100% whatever happens. I have friends who spend way too much time second-guessing their agents, and I never want to be in that position. I think if you are wary on that first phone call, that’s a big red flag.

How did you know your agent was the right one for you?

There was a very specific moment in the phone call where we were discussing one aspect of the book, and she brought something up she thought should be highlighted, and I said, “yes, like...” (no spoilers, sorry) and I knew we were on the same page about what was important in this book. There is actually a detail in the book that is completely from that first conversation. I remember thinking, “She gets it, she really gets it.”

What is the revision process like between you and your agent?

My current agent and I have a great revision process. She is extremely thorough and she takes a lot of time with everything she does, which sometimes makes me feel bad – I think she works really hard – but the level of detail in her notes makes revision much more collaborative to me. I think we are both people who would prefer no surprises when the revision is handed in.

I also asked her flat out to tell me if she thought a book wasn’t working early on, because unfortunately, with my first agent I felt sometimes like she didn’t want to say that and even more unfortunately, I was at a place where I didn’t want to hear it either and in retrospect I think she knew that. And while my current agent is lovely and kind, she will tell me what she thinks and I know she means it, even if it’s not something I want to hear. Which means I can also trust her when she loves something and thinks it’s great.

Did you have any previous contact with editors that you shared with your agent? For example, from conferences or workshops.

I did, and it was very surprising. I’m not an elevator pitch person, so I’ve never done a pitch session or anything like that. But I ended up sitting at a fun lunch table at NESCBWI with some other authors, plus an agent and an editor, right before my book went on sub. The editor was sitting right next to me and we chatted about all sorts of things – in particular she told me how to get Siri to do funny things on my phone – and then, when the meal was nearly done, she said, “so, tell me about your book.”

I almost had a heart attack.

Luckily my wonderful Pitch Wars mentor was sitting at the same table and saw my face, and jumped in with some nice words about my book while I composed myself enough to give the pitch. And the editor told me to tell my agent to send it to her when we were ready to go on sub. That was a fun email to write to my agent that night back at the hotel!

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What do you suggest a writer does while out on submission?

Drink heavily? Sorry, that’s probably inappropriate. But it’s a tough time. I think focusing on other things, whether it be the family you neglected while writing your book or writing another book or your day job or anything else is important. Let your agent do their job. And cultivate patience.

How much contact do you have with your agent when you are out on submission?

It varied. I was not on submission for a very long time with this book because we had interest fairly quickly, and once things started moving they moved very fast. There was a couple of weeks where we emailed at least every day, and a day or two where it was five or six times a day, plus talking on the phone. With my first experience on submission, things took a lot longer, so there was more time in between contact. In my experience, if agents have good news, they don’t wait to tell you, so if they are not contacting you it’s either nothing or bad news. Not that knowing that makes silence any easier to deal with, unfortunately.

Did you know there was interest in the book before you got an offer or was it a surprise?

We knew, because there had been some other murmurs of interest, so my publisher told us that the book was going to the acquisitions meeting. I actually knew the day and time they’d be discussing it. So I spent the whole morning making blueberry jam to keep myself occupied. Even so, the call came earlier than I expected -- I saw that it was my agent on the caller ID and prepared myself for the possibility of anything. But once she said hello, I knew instantly it was good news. She’s normally the most composed person you could ever meet, but she sounded downright giddy just saying her name! (I’m hoping to make her sound that way many more times in the future)

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What’s involved in promoting a book?

As someone who felt confident about querying and working with an agent because I’d had previous experience, promotion has been a whole new world to me. I’m not the best at shoving myself at people – it’s just not in my nature, so for me it’s been about finding the right balance. A big boost for me has been being part of my debut group, The Sweet Sixteens. Doing things with other authors feels right to me, and I’m better at promoting other books sometimes than I am my own. I like the feeling that we’re all working together to share news about the great books coming out in 2016. But I’ve also had to come out of my comfort zone a few times, too. I’m lucky that my family and my friends – both writers and non-writers – have been really supportive of my book and eager to spread the word.

What special things do you get to be a part of as a 2016 debut author?

Well, it’s just starting for me, so I think there are going to be a lot of great moments. But I have a few things that stand out, big and small. Picking up my badge at ALA midwinter and getting the “author” ribbon and then going and seeing a pile of ARCs of my book at the S&S booth. Reading to classrooms of kids as part of World Read Aloud Day. And, personally, the excitement of people in my local community and my daughter’s school, which is doing a book club based around my book. All those times when this thing I wrote sitting alone in my house is shared with the world. I don’t think that will ever get old.

What other 2016 debut books have you gotten to read? Did you get to read them early?

I’ve been able to read a number of debut books and quite a few stand out in my mind. A current favorite I keep talking about is THE LAST GREAT ADVENTURE OF THE PB&J SOCIETY, which comes out in April. It’s one of those middle grade stories that has adventure and friendship and real life all mixed together. I remember so much being a kid that age and wanting to try and make the adult world bend to what I thought should happen, so I feel like I know the main character, Annie, and what she’s going through. Plus, it’s hilarious, and part of the reason why I love writing and reading middle grade is the humor. I’m a sucker for funny books with heart, and this is one I can’t recommend enough.

What was it like to see your cover?

It was a thrilling day, one of my favorites before publication (after finding out my book had sold, of course). I had tried not to have pre-conceived notions about what it would look like, but even so it was so different, and so much better, than I ever imagined. The idea that such a wonderful artist drew something so perfect for my book had me smiling for a week.

Thank you, Lee!

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Query.Sign.Submit.Debut! with Mia Siegert

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Mia is a young adult writer and her debut novel, JERKBAIT, will publish from Jolly Fish Press on May 3! She is represented by Travis Pennington of The Knight Agency.

 

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What resources and websites did you use when querying?

I used Jeff Hernan’s Guide to Literary Agents and Query Tracker religiously. I also did research on Twitter and blogs to see the interaction (if any) between the agent and their clients. I felt I could learn more about them that way.

How did you keep track of your queries?

I used a Word doc for each novel—the agent I queried, the agency, the date sent, follow up (if necessary), response, Partial/Full, date of requested material sent, R&R, etc. It was tedious but VERY easy, especially as I moved them around to see active requests versus not. And, for each agent, I included their email so I could contact them immediately should another offer come in.

What was your method for querying? Small batches? Query widely? Wait for feedback?

Minimum of 16 queries out at a time. If I got a rejection, I sent out a few more. I rarely waited for feedback for querying, admittedly.

Did you ever have a Revise & Resubmit? What should a writer consider when deciding whether or not to take one on?

I’d suggest that ANY writer accept a R&R. Save the original copy of what you sent out just in case. But, usually, with the R&R, you end up with a more powerful piece. In fact, it was via a R&R with a different agent that led me to the offer with my agent (which the R&R requesting agent told me to accept).

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What was the week surrounding your offer(s) of representation like for you?

Hell, LOL! Honestly, I was a nervous wreck. I don’t think I slept at all, and I’ve never had so much pizza in a week. My agent (Travis Pennington of The Knight Agency) was the first to offer, but I wanted a week to think (and talk with other agents). The agent who’d last given me a R&R actually told me to sign with my agent because I’d be in excellent hands (which was great because I was thinking he’s REALLY good). I felt bad because one agent accidentally wrote the wrong deadline down and apparently had been planning on offering. Not that I would have signed with that agent, but that the agent seemed so glum.

How did you know your agent was the right one for you?

Admittedly, I’m an extremely aggressive writer in terms of style (i.e. how do I do this effectively? How can I improve? How can we sell this?), and I wanted to work with someone who was extremely aggressive with marketing yet loved literature of all varieties. When I talked with him on the phone, we discussed different novels and whatnot. I saw he actually researched me and even read some writing samples for another book. The second he said, “I think this is a LOT bigger than you think,” about one of my other novels (after saying he knew he was going to offer after reading the first paragraph of my debut novel), I knew this was it. And, on the spot, I said, “Let’s do this. I want to work with you.”

How editorial is your agent? Is it what you expected?

I’m not sure how he compares with other agents as I never worked with another agent before, and I’m not sure what I expected to be honest. That said, I think Travis is probably the smartest person I’ve ever worked with, no exaggeration. He’s read only two of my novels (JERKBAIT, which comes out in May, and an adult thriller we’re both excited about) but already made a game plan for what we’ll do after this. I really appreciate that he gives me multiple choices about what I want to do with career, such as sticking with the original intent of a piece or doing significant rewrites. We’re on the same wavelength for the most part, and fortunately he’s really good at explaining things when I get confused (unfortunately, due to a concussion history, I tend to get mixed up over really simple concepts, so I appreciate his patience).

At what point do you share new story ideas with your agent?

Whenever I have them. Sometimes he slows me down (like when I was working on the different passes for JERKBAIT and also working on edits for him and asked about what novel I should do when I’m waiting for responses), but for the most part he’s ready/willing to talk about concepts from the start. It makes sense, honestly—if I have a really bad idea, then I won’t waste 2-3 years on a terrible idea. But, if I have an idea I’m unsure about, and it’s actually a great one, he’s there to say, “Go for it!”

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What is a typical first round like once a writer goes on submission?

I have no idea because mine was very a-typical. J I think I’ll find out soon, though.

What do you suggest a writer does while out on submission?

Work on the next novel. I’m dead serious. You’ll drive yourself crazy waiting, and you might as well get that next project underway so you can pretend you won’t be overwhelmed by ridiculously tight deadlines, or 6 editorial passes… including, “Get this back ASAP,” when you’re in a different hemisphere… on vacation… to celebrate your birthday and getting engaged… and you have to pull all nighters and work on the airplane… (I say that dotingly because she’s amazing, but you can ask my editor, McKelle George—that absolutely happened).

Can you check in with your agent if there hasn’t been any news in a while?

Again, my situation wasn’t normal, but I’d think there’d be an issue if one couldn’t contact their agent.

How did you celebrate when you got the news about your book deal?

I… don’t know if I actually did… I think I went out to dinner with my Dad and Stepmom, and had some nice food (like those fancy cheeses and wine) with my Mom… but besides that? I… really don’t think I did.

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What’s involved in promoting a book?

An obscene amount of work that a lot of people aren’t willing to do. I don’t say that to be a criticism, but fact. I posted a lot on social media and did a ton of work for Goodreads. I sent out postcards and got a ton of 4x6 prints to sign and mail out. I ordered a mini hockey stick that’s custom for a giveaway. I made 37 bracelets, 1 necklace, and am in the process of making arm warmers in JERKBAIT’s colors. I email Travis frequently to ask his feedback, and I’m in contact with the publicity team at Jolly Fish Press almost daily, especially with Kayla (Assistant Publicist).

What special things do you get to be a part of as a 2016 debut author?

16 is a really special number for me. My birthday is November 16th. Robbie’s hockey number is 16. One of the… erm.. “important” characters in JERKBAIT has a screen name Jimmy2416. The book is getting released in 2016. It’s just… it’s a really special number for me, so this is exciting.

Also, being featured on so many 2016 Upcoming Release lists… just wow. There’s a lot of momentum, and I’m grateful for that.

What other 2016 debut books have you gotten to read? Did you get to read them early?

Oh jeez. I’ve read a lot but I’m blanking right now.

I read THIS IS WHERE IT ENDS by Marieke Nijkamp, CONSIDER by Kristy Acevedo, THE YEAR OF LIGHTNING by Ryan Dalton, and FIRSTS by Laurie Elizabeth Flynn (I think it will be almost impossible for any book to beat this in my head). I just got a few ARCs that I’m going to tear into soon, including Riley Redgate’s SEVEN WAYS WE LIE, and I’m hoping for a few others.

I can’t wait for THE SYMPTOMS OF BEING HUMAN by Jeff Garvin and MY SEVENTH GRADE LIFE IN TIGHTS by Brooks Benjamin.

Is there a lot of support among debut authors?

Yes, there is. Especially in The Sweet Sixteens group. Because I went to Australia and New Zealand for two months, I was sort of “late” to join the group in major activities. But, within it, now that I’m more active, I’m meeting some incredible people with incredible stories, all very different. I’m learning about the process, and I feel protected, too. Everyone has been incredible but I’ve been super blown away by Heidi Heillig, Laurie Elizabeth Flynn, and Kathleen Glasgow in particular (and am definitely learning a TON from them about the process). The others as well (I wish I could write everyone but that’d be a list of 170+ names!)

I also am getting close with Kristy Acevedo and Ryan Dalton, whose debuts are this year from Jolly Fish Press. Ryan’s book already came out and dealt with twins (so we talked a bit about that), and Kristy’s book comes out just two weeks before mine (deals with anxiety, which is shared with one of my characters). I think Ryan and Kristy probably have more similar writing styles than I do with either of them.

Thanks, Mia! 

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Query.Sign.Submit.Debut! with Laurie Elizabeth Flynn

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Laurie is a young adult author and her debut, FIRSTS, is now available from Thomas Dunne Books/St Martin’s Griffin! Laurie is represented by Kathleen Rushall of the Andrea Brown Literary Agency.

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What are some important things for querying writers to consider when researching agents?

I think it’s important to do a lot of research before starting to query. There’s the desire to get your shiny query out there as fast as you can, but don’t rush yourself—you owe it to yourself to be informed before you make any decisions! Familiarize yourself with what agents are looking for, and be organized—I made a spreadsheet in Excel to keep track of who I wanted to query, the dates I sent query letters, and the responses. Ensure that your information is up to date, because agent websites can change frequently. Twitter is also a great resource, and the #MSWL hashtag in particular. It’s a fantastic way to get a feel for not only what an agent is looking for, but his or her personality too!

What helped you get though the query trenches?

Querying is so many things. It’s exciting and terrifying and frustrating, and you experience a whole range of emotions—hope, elation, disappointment. Sometimes it’s an unrelenting cycle and feels utterly exhausting. The worst habit I got into was waiting for emails to magically appear in my inbox. I felt so much better as soon as I started working on a new project. My head was in that space instead of waiting for an email that might never come. I also made friends at Agent Query Connect who were going through the same process as I was. Writing is often a solitary activity, and being able to share what I was feeling with other writers at similar stages was a powerful thing.

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What was the week surrounding your offer(s) of representation like for you?

It was, in a word, insane! My husband and I were moving into our new house, so I was living in shambles during a few of those calls. The whole week was a whirlwind, but I never stopped thinking about Kathleen’s words and her excitement for my manuscript.

How did you know your agent was the right one for you?

I had no idea what to expect during that first call with Kathleen. My heart was pounding so hard I was sure she could hear it through the phone! But she was so kind, smart, and insightful. Her suggestions for what Firsts could become really resonated with me. But what really stuck with me from that first call was Kathleen’s fearless attitude. Firsts is an edgy book, and Kathleen didn’t give me false promises—she just let me know that she was willing to go there with me. I’ll never forget that faith she had—and continues to have—in me.

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Do you see the feedback from editors?

I like to see the feedback from editors. I think it’s really helpful. However, this is a personal preference—some writers choose not to receive the feedback. Just be honest with your agent about what level of feedback you want to see!

What do you suggest a writer does while out on submission?

Always be working on something new. When your heart is with a different project, you’ll obsess less about the fact that you’re on submission, and it’ll stop your mind from wandering to scary places!

How did you celebrate when you got the news about your book deal?

I was at work when I got the call, but when I got home, I celebrated with pizza and champagne!

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What is the best thing about being a debut author?

The best part, for me, is hearing from teens who loved my book or saw themselves in the characters. That means more to me than anything. It’s also truly amazing to go into a bookstore and see your friends all over the shelves. It’s a feeling of pride and amazement!

Is there a lot of support among debut authors?

The level of support and friendship between debut authors has been incredible. We all cheer for each other and help share the love for each other’s books. I truly adore this group of people and I’m so proud to be part of it!

Have you done any conferences, book festivals, or events as an author? What was it like?

I was able to attend ALA Midwinter in Boston, and the OLA Super-Conference in Toronto. Getting to meet other authors, teachers, librarians, bloggers, and people in publishing has been an absolute highlight of my year. There’s an amazing energy in the room with so many passionate book people! When you have been talking to people online for months or years, being able to meet (and hug!) them in person is a great feeling.

Thanks, Laurie! 

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Query.Sign.Submit.Debut! with Kathy MacMillan

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Kathy is a young adult author and her debut, Sword and Verse, is now available from HarperTeen! She is represented by Steven Malk of Writers House.

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What advice would you give to querying writers?

Don’t give up! This business is incredibly subjective, and it can take dozens of rejections before you bring the right project to the right agent or editor at the right time.

Had you queried other books before the one that got you your agent?

Yes! Sword and Verse was actually the fourth novel manuscript I shopped around to agents.

What helped you get though the query trenches?

I just kept writing and submitting. I always made sure to have another project to work on, and every time I got a rejection I turned around and sent out another query immediately, before depression had a chance to set in. So much of the process is really about staying ahead of the negative voices in your head.

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How did you know your agent was the right one for you?

The way I ended up with my current agent is a bit unusual. Back in 2008, I read a Writer’s Digest article about new agents looking for clients, and one of them, Lindsay Davis at Writers House, looked like a great fit for me and my book. So I submitted to her and she said she’d like to work with me to revise it. Then, several months later, she moved out of the country and Steven Malk, the senior agent with whom she had been working, took over. They shared a similar perspective, which I share too: that it’s more important to take the time and do it right than it is to rush or chase trends. Steven is very much about building an author’s career, not just publishing a book.

How editorial is your agent? Is it what you expected?

Extremely editorial! We did four years of extensive revisions on the manuscript before we went to submission. There are literally three scenes in the final book that were in the original manuscript. Some writers might balk at getting a 40-page edit letter with extremely drastic suggestions, but I was at a point where I was dying for that kind of feedback and I knew it was what I needed to get to the next level.

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Do you see the feedback from editors?

I did, but that was my choice. As far as I can tell, the biggest difference between submitting through an agent and submitting directly to editors is the quality of your rejections. With submissions through agents, you get a paragraph about what’s awesome about your book before they tell you why they are rejecting it.

What do you suggest a writer does while out on submission?

Keep writing. Go on vacation. Work overtime at your day job. Meditate. Basically do anything to distract yourself, because it might take weeks and it might take months and no amount of obsessing about it will make it go faster.

Is there anything you learned while being on submission that you didn’t know before?

The biggest surprise to me was when my agent and I sat down and selected the publishers we would submit to. In addition to considering which imprints would be a good match for my genre, my agent looked at which editors he thought would mesh well with my personality and revision style. It had never occurred to me that this could be a consideration, and it was an area where I was definitely grateful for his experience and knowledge.

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What’s involved in promoting a book?

It depends on the book and how much the author is willing to do, but no debut author can afford to sit back and hope the publisher does all the promotion. It can get overwhelming, which is why it’s important to pick the things that matter to you and that will work for your book. In my case, I have lots of library connections because I have been a librarian for years, so I partnered with a local library to run a trailer contest for my book and set up author panels at local libraries. I chose to focus on Twitter as my major social media platform, and I have run lots of giveaways there. I also did a pre-order incentive where readers got their names written in the language of the gods from the book.

What other 2016 debut books have you gotten to read? Did you get to read them early?

So many! This is one of the perks of being part of a debut author group! We have a system to pass around our advance reading copies, and we actively read, review, and promote each other’s books. I’ve probably read about 25 of the 2016 debuts so far, including A Study in Charlotte by Brittany Cavallaro, The Year We Fell Apart by Emily Martin, and The Last Fifth Grade of Emerson Elementary by Laura Shovan.

Is there a lot of support among debut authors?

Goodness, yes! I might be a little biased, as I founded The Sweet Sixteens, but I can’t imagine getting through the lead-up to 2016 without the group. So much of the debut process involves waiting around – having other debut authors to celebrate and commiserate with keeps you sane!

What advice would you give to writers who are working hard to get to their own debut year?

About a year before my book came out, I asked my agent what I should be focusing on. And he said, “Writing your next book. Only that.” I didn’t understand what he meant until Sword and Verse actually came out. It’s easy to think that the voices of self-doubt and distraction will go away once you get an agent, once you get a book deal, once your book finally gets published – but all that happens is that the volume of those voices gets amplified. The only thing the author has control over is the work, and it’s easy to lose sight of that. So find a way to keep your focus on the writing where it belongs, and hold tight to that no matter what happens.

Thank you, Kathy!

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Query.Sign.Submit.Debut! with Sarah Ahiers

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Sarah is a young adult author and her debut, ASSASSIN’S HEART, is now available from HarperTeen! She is represented by Mollie Glick.

 

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QUERY

What resources and websites did you use when querying?

Oh QueryTracker almost exclusively, with some spot checks at Literary Rambles. I love QueryTracker and think every querying writer should be using it. And I still spend a lot of time over in the QT Forum.

What was your method for querying? Small batches? Query widely? Wait for feedback?

My method was send a few queries, 2-3, wait to see if I got a bite so I would know that the query was working. And when I did, send a full batch of ten. Then, whenever I got a response (a request or a rejection) I would send another query so I always had ten queries out at a time.

Had you queried other books before the one that got you your agent?

Yep! I queried two other books. I got a lot of full requests for both of them, and some R&Rs but not an offer. But that was okay. I just kept writing.

What helped you get though the query trenches? Inspirational posts? Writer friends? Writing another book?

Writing another book for sure. This is another thing I think every querying writer should be doing while querying. Because if you’re working on a new book that you’re excited for, then the rejections on the other book tend to go easier. And, if you do get The Call, you’re also in a great position with a new book, too! Also, if no call ever comes, by the time you’re done querying the old book, you’re ready to query the new one. Rinse and repeat.

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What was the week surrounding your offer(s) of representation like for you?

Crazy. So, so crazy. I had just started my MFA and was actually at a ten day residency when the first offer came in. Other offers quickly followed, so I kept having to duck out of lectures and presentations to take calls and check my emails. I took calls pretty much up until the day I had to make a decision. It was both really exciting and really stressful.

Did you have any previous contact with editors that you shared with your agent? For example, from conferences or workshops.

I had gone to a MN SCBWI conference the month before I started querying and had a critique session of the first 5 pages with an editor from Harlequin Teen. And she mostly just said that she loved it and wanted to see the full when it was on submission and told me I could put her name in my query (that she wanted to see it) and I certainly did. I think that helped with my high request rate.

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What do you suggest a writer does while out on submission?

Oh man, I don’t even know. I mean, logically, you should start another book. I think it’s the same thing as when querying. Writing another book is never a bad idea, I think. But I was only on sub for two weeks and I spent a lot of that feeling super stressed about a lot of different things, and so if you’re in that situation I think my advice is to breathe, talk to someone who will listen (who’s maybe been there before) and know that submission will not last forever.

How much contact do you have with your agent when you are out on submission?

So, my submission period was only two weeks, but we were in contact pretty much daily. She let me know everything that was going on and what her plans were.

Did you know there was interest in the book before you got an offer or was it a surprise?

I knew there was interest. There was actually interest before we went on sub, so my agent was actually going to set up an auction until it sold on a pre-empt. But before that pre-empt deal came through, my agent emailed me and let me know they were putting an offer together. Still, though, when the offer email came through, it was both surprising and so, so exciting.

How did you celebrate when you got the news about your book deal?

I honestly don’t quite remember. I’m sure I went out to dinner with my family, since that’s how we celebrate most things. I know I called my mom and sister right away. And I bought a piece of jewelry with a portion of my advance.

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What other 2016 debut books have you gotten to read? Did you get to read them early?

Oh, so many. I have read (to date) 33 of the 2016 debuts, all due to arc tours. There are so many great books coming out this year. I can’t wait until they’re all out so people can snatch them up.

Some of my favorites (so far! I have a lot more to read) are: Kali Wallace’s SHALLOW GRAVES, Parker Peevyhouse’s WHERE FUTURES END, Rahul Kanakia’s ENTER TITLE HERE, Katie Kennedy’s LEARNING TO SWEAR IN AMERICA and Christian Heidecker’s CURE FOR THE COMMON UNIVERSE.

Have you met other debut authors through the process?

Yes! I’m a member of the Sweet Sixteens debut group and have “met” (via the internet) so many of them. They are a great bunch of writers and I’m super glad that I joined the group. I’ve also gotten to meet a few of them in person, too! One of them moved to the Twin Cities (where I live) and one of them I met at AWP when it was Minneapolis. I would really love to meet more (or all!) of them if I could.

Thanks, Sarah!

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Query.Sign.Submit.Debut! with Monica Tesler

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Monica is a middle grade author and her debut, BOUNDERS, is now available from Simon & Schuster/Aladdin! She is represented David Dunton of Harvey Klinger, Inc.

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QUERY

What advice would you give to querying writers?

After spending some time in the query trenches, I suggest that writers view the query process as fluid. Even after you’ve drafted, revised, and revised again with feedback from critique, your query may not be in the best form to land an agent. Query in batches and use the feedback from those queries—even if the feedback is silence or form rejections—to revise your query and try again.

How did you keep track of your queries?

I used a spreadsheet to track queries that listed the agent’s name, query date, response, response date, request, request date, etc. I also noted if I received personal feedback from an agent that I may want to reference if querying another manuscript. Keeping track of my queries in a formal, organized fashion helped me maintain personal distance and treat it like a business.

Are there any conferences you attended that really helped you move forward as a writer during this stage?

In Boston, there’s a terrific writer’s center called Grub Street. I attended a query and first five pages workshop there shortly after I completed my first manuscript. The content of the class and the personal feedback I received on my submission package were extremely helpful. Also, I’ve attended the New England SCBWI Regional Spring Conference annually going back to before I was agented. It’s a great conference, and a terrific place to build a writer support network.

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How did you know your agent was the right one for you?

Even though I come from a formal business background and had a long list of professional questions prepped for potential agents, I had a real gut feeling about my agent, David Dunton of Harvey Klinger, Inc., from the beginning. Within the first few minutes of our phone call, David and I established a small world connection and really clicked. Although I’m sure I managed to get most of my questions answered, that moment of connection sealed the deal for me. I also wanted to make sure that David’s visions for Bounders were consistent with mine, and fortunately they were.

Did you sign as a client of a career agent or on a book-by-book basis?

I’ve seen this question many times, and I researched this issue when generating my list of agents to query. That said, I’m not convinced it’s a meaningful distinction. I think most agents would love to work with authors for their career, provided they agree on future projects and have success taking those projects to market. On the other hand, regardless of how an agency relationship is initially framed, all author-agent contracts should have reasonable provisions allowing either party to terminate for future books. It’s best to check your contract terms.

Once a writer has signed with an agent, what’s the next step?

I think that varies depending on the agent. David and I went through a brief round of revisions prior to submitting Bounders to publishers. In general, David made suggestions while giving me wide latitude in terms of how to implement changes. We had a few points we disagreed on, but after exchanging emails which resulted in some minor edits, we reached a place where we both felt confident about the manuscript and proceeded to the submission stage.

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What do you suggest a writer does while out on submission?

This is going to sound very cliché, but the best thing to do while out on submission is to keep writing. Ideally, you can work on something completely unrelated to your subbed novel without any pressure attached. There is no escaping the fact that submission can be an extremely stressful time. By working on a new project, you’re building your repertoire of work which is important whether this book sells or not. Also, I found spending time outdoors, engaging in other creative activities, and doing yoga to be very helpful.

How much contact do you have with your agent when you are out on submission?

I think this depends on what’s going on with your submission. In short, when there’s no news, there’s no news. I think it’s fine to check in with your agent from time-to-time, maybe once or twice a month. Also, it’s important to clarify expectations with your agent. Maybe you want to hear all news from editors, good or bad, when it comes in. Maybe you only want to hear when there’s potential good news. Maybe you’d prefer to have your agent email you once a week, or less frequently, grouping together any editor responses. There are lots of ways to handle submission news, so the key is upfront communication. Personally, I asked David to pass along all editor responses as they came in.

Did you know there was interest in the book before you got an offer or was it a surprise?

My offer was a complete surprise. I love telling the story of receiving David’s email letting me know I had a three-book offer from Simon & Schuster. I was alone in my kitchen, and when I read the message, I screamed and fell to the floor. After managing to recover, I thought how funny it was that no one witnessed my reaction, like a tree falling in the woods. I reenacted the scene later that day for my kids.

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Have you met other debut authors through the process?

Yes! One of the best parts of the debut experience is connecting with other authors! I’m a member of The Sweet Sixteens, which is a large, online debut group of middle grade and young adult authors. I also participate in a few small, informal groups. Connecting with these writers has been awesome. We share information, pool marketing efforts, and support one another in many ways. It’s so cool to feel part of such an immensely talented group of authors!

What was it like to see your cover?

Two words: Blown Away. Truly, I am so blessed and grateful that the incredibly talented Antonio Javier Caparo was brought on to illustrate the cover for Bounders. When I first saw the image, my eyes filled with tears. It was an experience like nothing I’d ever known to see his visual rendering of something I created—like he had plucked the scene straight from my imagination. One of the highlights of my debut year has been connecting with Antonio and interviewing him about the cover illustration process.

What else are you working on along with all the promotion?

Bounders is a series, so I’m working with my talented editor, Michael Strother, to revise the second book and prep it for publication. When I’m not immersed in the Bounders world, I’m playing around with some new projects.

Thank you, Monica!

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